I ka mea pohihihi o ka poem "Akuma ka hele mai, maloo pua"

"Akuma ka i hiki mai, maloo pua" - kekahi o ka loa kaulana poem e pili ana i Akuma ka, i ke ola i loko o ka noho 'ana kamaliʻi Memories o na mea he nui Lūkini kanaka. Kēia mea e kahaha ko oukou naau, no ka mea, kona 'ole ka loa mea. Kēia hanaia He oluolu eʻae keiki i uuku: ia mea i loko o ko lākou manaʻo i nā primitive haule ana o nā kiʻi. Poem "Akuma ka hele mai, maloo pua," paʻiʻia i loko o nā keiki i ka buke a me ka moʻokalaleo ua mau no ka mea kākau Pleshcheeva. Ua mea waiwai 'ana i kumumanaʻo i na Verses o ka ua' ole ua pinepine i loaʻa i loko o nā keiki a ka Hōʻuluʻulu manaʻo puke a me poetry puke: keiki wale aʻo ia ma ka naau, pela nooaai? Ai ka hoomanao ana a me ka ulu noʻeauʻaiʻana. Ma ka poem "Akuma ka hele mai, maloo pua" i makana wale concise palapala: nui trehstopnogo chorea me alternating kane a me ka wahine hope (makau kuhohonu ana ma ka laina mua ma luna o ka penultimate syllable, a me ka lua - ka hope).

Ma ka palapala, ai ikeia unfounded mea pohihihi e pili ana i ka poem i ka mea aʻu i hoolilo ai i keia 'atikala. Ka mea i keia hanaia ua i komo i loko o kekahi o ka hoiliili ana o na hana o Alexei Nikolaevich Pleshcheeva. Nolaila noi mai i ka ninau: "A ina paha oia i ka mea kākau o ka poem?" Au e ole pokrivlyu uhane, ina au e olelo aku nei: ", He nui paha i na keiki mai ole i hooili mai ai me ka nani o ka mea nana i hana" E aʻo i ka hana o Aleksei Nikolaevich Pleshcheeva, au ike ia au hāʻule no ia, ua hoopaa hoi i na manawa: ike aku la oia i loko o ka mea wale wilting. 'Aʻole i kēia hoole aku paha i ka theme like o ka poem "Akuma ka hele mai, maloʻo pua." Ma ka unuhi i ka hopena a mai keia kilo, ka mea hiki ke ua kūkākūkāʻia ia kekahi kumu e manaʻo ana ia ia, e like me ka mea kākau o kēia huahana mea.

Ma ka 'ē aʻe lima, ka mea i ike haku mele ke hana ia keia mamuli o ke heluia, e Pleshcheeva e haule iho, a me he mea' ano o kona mau poem. Akā,ʻo wai, a no ke aha ka mea, e pono e hana i kēia? Malia paha kekahi maoli makemake e heluhelu i kana hana, hoi, e like oe heluhelu nui na hana o ka haku mele kaulana; ole paha ka mea, ua huikau ka typo i loko o ka makaukau ana o ka ohi ana o na keiki i ka moʻokalaleo, i mua paʻi i ka poem "Akuma ka hele mai, maloʻo pua." I ka mea kākau o ka mea pohihihi ia iaʻu pehea, au manaʻo, a no na mea e ae. He waiwai ka uku noonoo ana i ka maʻiʻo o ka poem, a, e like me ka hana Pleshcheeva loaʻa scant ano ao ao. Mau poem pinepine no inexperienced haku mele, ka poe lawelawe e mamuli o ka hana o ka luawai-ikeia kākau. Superficial pokole o ka poem unsophisticated mea heluhelu ke 'ai pono i ka apono. Ke Kumu Holoholomoku ma mua kilohi manao hoʻokino, noonoo ole a me ka nani. Inā ka mea heluhelu e lohe i ka 'ehaʻeha o ka maʻiʻo o ka ia, ka mea e haawi mai ia ia wale i ka meager, a e kaumaha ana kiʻi o ke ano.

Ma kana hana ma keia kumuhana Mikhail Zolotonosov hoʻopaʻapaʻa i ka mea kākau o ka poem loa he mea'ē aʻe ma mua o ka mea kākau o ka Orthodox puke haʻawina no ka moʻokalaleo. Ka puke Ua houluuluia aineiniaeoi o ka Apana kula o Moscow Alekseem Baranovym, a paʻiʻia i ka 1885. Ia mea i loko o kēia ohi o Lūkini moʻokalaleo poem Ua pai mua "Akuma ka hele mai, maloʻo pua." E hilinai ana ma ka 'oihana manao a me kā lākou mau ke koho, au ae aku i ka manawa kūpono o ke kilo wahahee o ka poem. Pela ka mea, aohe kumu e manaoio i loaʻa mea credible hoike o ka poe mea nae i ka haku ai.